present and past participle in descriptive text

SALSABILLAH

            The women giving me money is my sister. Her name is  Salsabillah. She was humble girls from a small village. She is wanting to be successful athlete, but no one in her family supported her. 

            Salsabillah was trying to achieve he goal by doing simple sport seriously. She was jogging, running, and cycling, but liked speed walking best. It was to cheapest sport, but she didn’t have anyone to compete against.

            A year later, she was selecting as the athlete to represent her province he National Sport Event. She was not so lucky this time. She gotten a bronze medal, but she wasn’t disappointing. She tried to reach her dream as the best.